Part four is now available of Fardea's escapade. I've also gone back and added a small bit into part two if you want to check that out. It wasn't that I needed to, but I thought it added something to her storyline which may be useful to know later in her development (hint, hint.)
Fardea-Part-2- Darcellis Fate
Fardea-Part-4-Turning the Tides
Will check it out. Thanks for the update. :)
ReplyDeleteI like Fardea the best out of all your characaters. I would have enjoyed seeing the Earl attack her with his fruit and cheese tray. I'm not sure I can picture her crying obnoxiously...was she faking it? The tears falling into ample bosow was a nice touch. I'm expecting a little romance to pop up somewhere. Great job, Mike! I should get my butt in gear and do something similar in my blog. :)
ReplyDeleteHmm, I'll see what I can do with Earl... As for the romance, she's a loner at the moment. Her big debut will be as the love interest in book 2 of the series.
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